Sarah,Plain and Tall ( Chapter 8) by ENJU
First, the storm comes. Next, Sarah said,"I am a good carpenter". Then they (Sarah,,Jacob) fixed the roof and they saw huge cloud, horribly black, moving toward them."A Squall", yelled Jacob.After that, a few raindrops came, then stronger and louder."Wait!",cried Sarah "My chickens!". Caleb asked Sarah,"what color is the sea when it storms?".She said,"Blue, gray and green".At down, there was the sudder sound of hail, like stones tossed against the barn.Then, the hail crunched and melted beneath their feet. Finally, it was white and gleaming for as far as they looked like sun on glass.Like the sea.
2 Comments:
I like it. Good job. Sara C
By CESL, at 8:36 AM
You have a lot of great description here. I can almost hear the hail crunch and see it gleam.
~Jessica
By CESL, at 7:01 PM
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